Book Works - Crit feedback

For the crit I did produce a book...it wasn't final, but I thought it was the best way to represent the idea that I was going for; A 'book box' with a series of postcards inside it - so it looks like a hardback book but its actually a box with postcards inside.

(For the crit I did actually have examples of postcards inside it)

Although the type on the postcards are based on song titles and song lyrics, I made a point of saying that I didn't want to make this clear in the set - so I would write the artists or anything on it, I would simply use the line.

Feedback;

Following on from the crit I will;
- Finalise my postcards.
- Think of name for the book.
- Final 10 pens or pencils to put in the book.
- Produce them!