Set back...oh dear

And then I started putting the sentences together.....oh dear.

Even though I didn't work on the layouts very much, I still don't think the layout could have improved it...so I thought maybe colour could...

But it didn't.

As I have now laid it out, I will print it out and fold it as a book but I know just from looking at it on screen that I'm not going to be happy with it.

Back to the drawing board...